'Fusion' magazine - Sketch

Here is my sketch, as you can see, my drawing skills are not at a particularly high standard. The proportions of the person in this sketch is all wrong, I aim to make the main picture bigger, and have smaller pictures dotted around. My main aim is to not crowd my front cover and only show the main information that is to be shown in the magazine.  My back ground will hopefully make the front cover seem a bit more crowded.

I want to make my front cover seem fairly formal and show a serious tone. I don't want to make my magazine seem chatty, informal, and not have a serious tone. So I tried to stay formal and add colour so as to make it easier on the eye, and more appealing to the target audience.